Writing in Role - After Grampa's Death

Grampa, Grampa's gone. We buried him in the groun' today and I, I jus' felt like cryin', and the cryin' feelin' wouldn't go away, and I just felt like cryin' and cryin' but I couldn't cry because, no matter if Tommy's here or in McAllister, I'm still one of the men in this god damn fambly, I gotta be strong for the fambly; I mean Winfield looks up to me and well, I've been lookin' out for Rosasharn since Tommy went away, makin' sure Connie doesn't step outta line. I gotta be strong for the Fambly. Grampa was always there to make decisions and look after us but now he's gone, I guess we all just gotta step up alittle bit and make sure the family stick together. He looked after Ma when she was just a kid, and then looked after me too, he looked after all of us. Now he's gone.

I really like the accent in this video, but I think I need to show more emotion in my face and body language.